Too Close to the Edit

Too Close to the Edit

Oh, how I miss the time 

when tenses were uber-critical

when we would rise (and/or fall)

into an overwrought tandem of incorrigible punctuation  

I shivered your timber 

once upon a time

but without a plank

I can no longer walk

and parenthetically

you're not mine

Shari-Lyn McArthur | 1 Comment | Share Article

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[Matt Moseman]

hahaha

this is the shit shari
keepem coming
madam custodienne