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Wednesday
Feb242010

The Custodian by Joe Lofgren

 

The custodian looks
as if he will fall dead tomorrow,
as his methamphetic body
pushes garbage
floor to floor.

This is the frail heaving man
as he leans to the sideways stumble,
half aware gander
through the longest halls
of his life.
I wonder as he passes
those who gawk

misunderstood

if he doesn't wonder
about the mores of custodial arts,
like the fine dexterity
in waxing previously
puked on floors,
or the recognition 
in something that
never gets dirty.

Does he clean 
around thoughts of sole order
or is there some hidden, shrunken, 
wrinkled reason,
for his peaceful radiance?

 

Reader Comments (7)

the frail heaving man...just lovely

February 24, 2010 at 9:51PM | Registered CommenterSue Lozynskyj

Thanks, Sue.

February 26, 2010 at 11:04AM | Registered CommenterJoe Lofgren

Is this old?

February 27, 2010 at 12:31AM | Registered CommenterErika Hommel

With changes, yes.

February 27, 2010 at 6:09AM | Registered CommenterJoe Lofgren

joe, very fine... there is something burning in this, cleansing if i dare invoke such a pre-post modern concept!

"thoughts of sole order" - a wonderful line, with or without the transposition to "soul"...

k

February 28, 2010 at 7:21AM | Registered CommenterKevin Jackson

dear Joe

this is one of my favorites from your pen

much enjoyed

silent lotus

March 3, 2010 at 8:03PM | Registered Commentersilent lotus

Some thoughts are coalescing on the conveyable.

March 5, 2010 at 12:37PM | Registered CommenterShari-Lyn McArthur
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