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Tuesday
Jul212009

Hanging On by A.E. Plastic

 

Nobulus in ermine twigs

the faint fannings of treachery

orders wood and nails and

takes the most limboesque

of his concubines

to bed that night

Reader Comments (3)

John, love the whimsy in this, "the faint fannings of treachery" is a treat.

Somehow feel the last lines drop right down, leaving curiously insipid taste...

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July 22, 2009 at 8:02AM | Registered CommenterKevin Jackson

you don't suppose that's Nabulus?

July 23, 2009 at 10:52PM | Registered CommenterMatt Moseman

Fabulus

July 24, 2009 at 2:26PM | Registered CommenterShari-Lyn McArthur
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